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 Forbidden Freedom - A P4L Story... - Chapter 16

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PostSubject: Forbidden Freedom - A P4L Story... - Chapter 16   Mon Apr 08, 2013 10:18 pm

Chapter 16 - Brother and Brother
POV - Zephyr - Legolover8

The big Swampert prevented that weird guy from escaping with the Guidance Shard! I think I owed the Water Pokémon something...

Suddenly, the big girl was trying to talk to me "Pert! Pert! Peeert!!"

...too bad I don't speak Pokémon...

Then, all of a sudden, the big Pokémon began signalling me to follow her! I wasn't sure what to do... The others would worry if I just disappeared...

I was about to turn around and tell the others about this little side quest but then the Massive Swamp Monster grabbed me by the arm and yanked me away!

I was walking with the Swampert for a good ten minutes until we came across a massive hole. It looked like a pit-fall trap... Could somebody be down there?

"Hello?!" I called, awaiting a reply...


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POV - Sapphire - Crystal

I snapped out of my day-dream when I heard the calling of someone...

"Hello?!" somebody called... I tried to shuffle towards the light area of the pit-fall to try and get in view...

"Hey, I can see you! Are you hurt?!" the person asked when he spotted me. "I'm fine... Can you get me out?" I asked, now a little more hopeful I'd be getting out of here...

"Sorry... I'm not sure if I can... Maybe, Woops!" The stranger said before dropping something down the pit-fall. "Geez! Can you see what I dropped anywhere?" The stranger asked.

I shifted towards the dropped object and was shocked to find what it was! "Are you one of the Guidance Shard Keepers?" I asked getting curious.

"Not that I know of... But I think I know someone who is actually!" Was the stranger's reply.

Then I had a good idea! "Can you throw down my rucksack!? It should be around there somewhere..." I called up to the stranger. The stranger went away for a few moments before dropping my rucksack down the pit-fall. I shifted towards the rucksack and took out a very important item I own... The Northwind Flute...

I used the Flute to call a very important Pokémon, the Flute made a whirring sound... And a few seconds later, a mist began to form in front of me... And then the Northwind Dog appeared... Suicune.

"Hello Suicune" I greeted the legendary dog. "I need your help for a while..." I started before I was interrupted by Suicune placing it's paw against the Water Guidance Shard on my chest. "I guess you're ready then?" I asked. Suicune nodded and began the transformation process, as did I. We began to let out a blue aura and started to merge... And a few seconds later, we had transformed...

I stood up, I regained my dark blue skin from the last time I transformed. I also regained my dark blue hair, and also the light blue markings across my body...

I looked up at the stranger again to find an excited look on his face... How strange.

My plan was to flood the pit-fall with water, then I would float towards the top!

After a short while, I was able to escape the pit-fall and was back on safe ground. "Thanks for the help stranger" I said smiling. "Name's Zéphyr. And I think you need to follow me..." The stranger told me. I became curious... "Well I'm Sapphire... And why do you want me to follow you?" I asked. Zéphyr replied "I got a friend who just did what you did..." "What, flood a pit-fall?" I questioned, stumped. Then Zéphyr replied "No... He transformed with his Pokémon... And a Guidance Shard"

No way... Another Keeper? I had to see if this was true!

"Please can I see your friend?" I asked. Zéphyr agreed and he led me towards somewhere called 'The P4L Base'.


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POV - Lewis - Lewis Big Benn

Sky and I were sat outside. I told him about what happened when I lost my parents in the fire... And I also showed him the scars I received in the fire. They were mainly along my arms... They were much more dominant when I was in this transformation...

I even told him about how I lost my brother... Sapphire...

After awhile we saw something in the distance... It was two people and... A Swampert? I couldn't tell... My eyesight is terrible...

"Hey I think it's Zéphyr! Sky said, standing up. I was about to follow Sky until Prince started to pull at my hand. "Whatcha want buddy?" I asked happily. This little guy always knows how to make me smile. "Niidooo..." He murmured before snuggling up to my arm.

I guess Zéphyr and his new friend will have to wait... Zzz...

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PostSubject: Re: Forbidden Freedom - A P4L Story... - Chapter 16   Mon Apr 08, 2013 10:30 pm

A good and perfect scene of how pokemon and humans can help each other out. Perfect Hair, Form for me and It is EPIC! Well, Lewis I have finished almost all of them now I shall send them to you tomorrow and hopefully wake up to a hell of a comments list.
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PostSubject: ...   Mon Apr 08, 2013 10:33 pm

Yay! :') we're almost reunited big bro :')

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PostSubject: Re: Forbidden Freedom - A P4L Story... - Chapter 16   Mon Apr 08, 2013 10:36 pm

Almost! Ah! We will have to wait till the next day. Take a good rest and tell NidoPrince to look down his pilliow, so do you, both off yall look down your pillows. A gift. Now take care and rest.
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PostSubject: ...   Mon Apr 08, 2013 10:40 pm

We..we...will....Zzz

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