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 Forbidden Freedom - A P4L Story... - Chapter 23

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PostSubject: Forbidden Freedom - A P4L Story... - Chapter 23   Thu Apr 11, 2013 8:37 am

Chapter 23 - Dread
POV - Sapphire - Crystal

Zéphyr had been lying, passed out for over ten minutes now... I was getting worried... Not just for Zéphyr... But for Lewis as well...

After a short while, I saw Amanda appear from the base. She was limping slightly, but other than that, she seemed ok.

"Hey Amanda..." I greeted... She seemed concerned for something...

"Hey Sapphy" She replied, kneeling down beside me. "Did Lewis enter Zéphyr's mind?" Amanda asked, seeming to know something which I clearly didn't. "I... Think so..." I simply answered.

"Zéphyr is trapped in his own mind... By something..." Amanda started. "And only Lewis will be able to set him free..." she stated.

When she said that, I instantly became panicked! Lewis was on his own... Unless he could get Zéphyr... What if this 'something' trapped Lewis as well?!

Then my attention was brought back to Zéphyr, who had awokened...

"Zeffy!" Amanda chirped with joy, but her joy was short lived when then next thing happened...

Firstly, the Dark Guidance Shard appeared, and fell to the ground... Then, the Ghost Shard appeared, and fell on my lap. "What?" I gasped when the Shard wasn't with Lewis...

A few moments later, Dodger appeared, and fell... Defeated and in pain...

"Dodger! Where's Lewis" I asked, moving from nervous, to agitated as hell! Dodger was unable to say anything... And is if he was, I wouldn't be able to understand him...

Finnaly, Lewis appeared... Badly hurt... He had blood all over his face and in his mouth. He was lifeless...

I just stared in shock... I was unable to speak. I cradled him, and cleaned away all the blood on his face with my water...

"Lewis..." I tried to talk... Failing after the first word. I then ripped off one of my necklaces, a purple-grey coloured one. I then thought to myself "Please... If you're gonna help... Help now"

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PostSubject: Re: Forbidden Freedom - A P4L Story... - Chapter 23   Thu Apr 11, 2013 5:06 pm

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