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 Hanging Shadows - A P4L Story - Chapter 1

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PostSubject: Hanging Shadows - A P4L Story - Chapter 1   Sun Jul 28, 2013 5:16 pm

Chapter 1 - Another Door Opens...
POV - ???

"David!? David!? Where are you!?"

..."David..."

...

POV - Sky - SkyDriver

"Sky?" Lewis questioned me. I knew what he was going to ask... "I don't know what the emergency is..." I answered the young Ghost boy.

Ignis carried on his flight at top speed as we returned to the base anticipating whatever had happened. Suddenly, as we were approximately five minutes away, Lewis started to shiver. He started shivering more violently! And then he clutched his head and nearly fell off Ignis before Sapphire caught him!

"Lewis! Hey, it's ok..." Sapphire said, attempting to calm his brother. "What's going on back there!?" I called, worried for Lewis. "I don't know! He won't stop shaking!" Sapphire answered.

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POV - Lewis - JaffaCrash

...What on earth? Where did Sky go? And big bro? Where am I?

"David!" came a woman's voice from behind me. I turned to see a Woman running frantically from the distance and towards me...

..."Lewis" came another voice... Big bro?

...

POV - Sapphire - Night

"I think he's coming back..." I called to Sky who didn't reply. I looked back at Lewis who slowly opened his eyes. He looked... confused. "Little bro?" I quietly said to him. He smiled. "You had me worried there bro!" I laughed and helped him sit back up.

"Big bro... who's David?" Lewis suddenly asked out of the blue. "I don't know any Davids, sorry bro" I told him.

...David?

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POV - Captain Arieon - Arieon

"How do you think they'll react?" Amanda questioned, regretting she asked as she turned away...

"I don't know... Sky loved this place..." I simply answered. "F*** you Diabolus..."

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PostSubject: Re: Hanging Shadows - A P4L Story - Chapter 1   Sun Jul 28, 2013 8:45 pm

Awesome Sauce, I love this, Can't wait for more.
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PostSubject: Re: Hanging Shadows - A P4L Story - Chapter 1   Mon Jul 29, 2013 5:32 am

This is great! Can't wait for more, like a good movie filled with commercial breaks, but without commercials Very Happy

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