Jaffa Crash Gym Leader
PokePartner : Posts : 525 Life Tokens : 6607 Join date : 2012-10-02 Age : 27 Location : England, Leeds
| Subject: The Story Of Nidoprince Mon Nov 05, 2012 5:38 pm | |
| A Fanfic! Haha XD I love writing (Just in case you haven't read my profile), but one thing I have never wrote is a Pokémon fanfic... well now I have XD
This is the prologue of my new story 'The Story of Nidoprince'.
You're probably thinking "Oh for the love of Arceus! He's talking about Nidorinos again!"... Well honestly, I don't blame you XD
Anyways... On with the Prologue! Tell me if you enjoy it!
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Prologue 16 years ago… “Nina! Nina where are you... Nina!”… “Ssssvipersss!” “Nina…” … Where’s Nathan? He should be here by now! I can’t protect the egg in this state! No… they’re coming… the vipers are coming… Oh my gosh! The egg is moving! Please wait little one! Please… “Sssss” “Oh no…” … “The Sevipers have attacked again haven’t they?” “Yes my lady… they have…” “This was such a peaceful place… with so many good Pokémon…” “…Yes my lady” “Ni…” “My goodness… hmm? Did you… hear that?” “Hear what my lady?” “Ni!” “That noise! It sounds like… crying!” “Crying? … Oh my, I hear it now!” “Nido!!” “It’s coming from over there, quickly let’s go see…” “Yes my lady!” “Nido! Ni…” “My lady! It’s a baby!” “He’s a baby Nidoran… but his skin… it’s…blue.” “Nido…” “My lady! There are Nidoqueen footprints here!” “Goodness! Well they certainly not mine!” “Where is his mother? And what about his father…” “Miss Lia… there is Seviper venom here…” “No… you don’t think… and his father too?” “I don’t know… most likely” “My lady… what should we do?” “Ni…Zzz…” “Miss Lia… we must do what is right…” “My lady… you’re still pregnant… can you handle another child?” “I am Queen Nido… It is my duty to help my people…” “As you wish… my lady…” “Zzz…” “Yes… this little one is special… I can tell.”
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legolover8 Gym Leader
PokePartner : Posts : 155 Life Tokens : 4867 Join date : 2012-09-26 Location : Having a sunbath in Olivine
| Subject: Re: The Story Of Nidoprince Tue Nov 06, 2012 4:38 am | |
| Blue:Nido Femel WHERES THE PRINCE and glad to see you posted it. | |
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Arieon Admin
PokePartner : Posts : 679 Life Tokens : 6789 Join date : 2012-02-07 Age : 26 Location : You see me don't you?
| Subject: Re: The Story Of Nidoprince Tue Nov 06, 2012 7:52 am | |
| He's refering to it being shiny and this could be an interesting story hope you keep it up | |
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SkyDriver Admin
PokePartner : Posts : 1024 Life Tokens : 7983 Join date : 2012-02-13 Age : 28 Location : Dragon's Den
| Subject: Re: The Story Of Nidoprince Tue Nov 06, 2012 7:57 am | |
| Cant wait to see the rest :3 One point of critisism: 2 poison types got kiled with... poison!? | |
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Jaffa Crash Gym Leader
PokePartner : Posts : 525 Life Tokens : 6607 Join date : 2012-10-02 Age : 27 Location : England, Leeds
| Subject: ... Tue Nov 06, 2012 1:43 pm | |
| Keep in mind that they were ambushed by several sevipers, not just 1 or 2 XD And poison isn't immune poison!
Yeah its not a normal nidoran... Its a shiny :O
Queen Nido is obviously a Nidoqueen and Miss Lia is a Kirlia XD
Part 2 (Or Chapter 1) is in the making ;D
Thanks For reading <3 | |
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